A great slide show Danny and very thoughtfully put together. But some revisions - specifically spelling errors. These need to be addressed.You could add another entertaining post by including:Ethnicity of audience? Why?Similar bands that would appeal? Why?I'd suggest C2's are probably your target because this is the largest demographic.Well done but to achieve a strong Level 3 or possible Level 4 could you revise as advised.All your posts re audience need to be posted under the Label G324 Audience Research.
A great slide show Danny and very thoughtfully put together. But some revisions - specifically spelling errors. These need to be addressed.
ReplyDeleteYou could add another entertaining post by including:
Ethnicity of audience? Why?
Similar bands that would appeal? Why?
I'd suggest C2's are probably your target because this is the largest demographic.
Well done but to achieve a strong Level 3 or possible Level 4 could you revise as advised.
All your posts re audience need to be posted under the Label G324 Audience Research.